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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling

0 posted 2003-07-24 08:30 AM


I wonder
does my plain
way of speaking
make me a bore?

often my words
are so blunt as
to hurt your
senses

when push comes to shove
does push become love?

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VOE
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 119
From the land of Camelot
1 posted 2003-07-24 09:01 AM


I don't know about everyone else, but I rather enjoy someone who knows how to get his/her point across with few words!  No, not boring in the least, and actually very refreshing!! Enjoyed the thoughts here...~V~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
2 posted 2003-07-24 09:09 AM


A person who speaks plainly is not boring becuase they do not have double meanings to what they say. Now the blunt person may at times hurt a person with their bluntness.
Example: You're fat you have to go a diet.(Blunt) or Hi Mary/Joe I have found this new diet it sounds so easy. Why don't we all go on this diet and have a race to see who will lose the most weight. That sounds like fun.
(Tact)
Good write.
Bon-Bon

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Member Patricius
since 2001-08-31
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just out of reach
3 posted 2003-07-24 09:26 AM


Well done Jason. Enjoyed this. Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."


— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet  

    

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

4 posted 2003-07-24 10:09 AM


Very creative.
Eric

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Gaia
5 posted 2003-07-24 01:27 PM



boredom is highly under rated


Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
6 posted 2003-07-24 01:30 PM


when push comes to shove
does push become love?

depends how kinky the person is..just kidding, hey i'm on meds and in a decent mood sue me

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
7 posted 2003-07-24 01:57 PM


good question...I suppose I'm used to "bored", so anything else would be great!
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