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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-07-24 05:06 AM


Words From My Heart

My beloved sons
tell her when
I'm gone
that I have
always loved her.
Even though my
hard heart
drove us apart,
my love for her
lived on
within my
broken heart.

JamesLee
July24
2003
Gabe
Jeremiah
Daniel.
These words
from my heart
for your mom
Beth.


© Copyright 2003 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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1 posted 2003-07-24 05:08 AM



Oh my...James...this just aches.  Such a sad write,
my friend, yet beautifully expressed.
Hugs to you,
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-07-24 06:31 AM



Janet Marie
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3 posted 2003-07-24 06:37 AM


SBJ ... from what I have read over the years here...I believe everything you've ever written has been from your heart.
This ones declaration of devotion is particularly touching.

"How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you."

LH

scorpio
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right...there
4 posted 2003-07-24 09:31 AM


James...moving write..

believe in what your heart feels...

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2003-07-24 09:36 AM


Do we ever stop loving someone, if the loving was real?
I know this feeling James and I know the answer,too.


hugs
M


Enchantress
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6 posted 2003-07-24 09:39 AM


Oh my James...very heart felt write!!
~soft smiles and gentle hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

CD
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7 posted 2003-07-24 09:41 AM


The emotion in this one is like the rush of water in the rapids.

Very touching indeed.

CD

Ericc
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8 posted 2003-07-24 10:08 AM


Soft and full of longing...very nice.
Eric

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9 posted 2003-07-24 11:45 AM


I too hold a place in my heart for someone that I had to set free, so I know this ache well too.  Like JM, I agree that always you seem to write out your heart.

I don't want to know where I am going, it will ruin my journey.   Carpe' Diem        

HopeS
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10 posted 2003-07-24 12:23 PM


heartfelt and touching James !

Hope

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2003-07-24 01:41 PM


Thank you Viraynes, passing shadows, Janet, Scorpio, nakdthoughts, Enchantress, CD, Ericc, Mysteria and Hope for the kind words...they are soothing and refreshing to my heart...James
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