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12/6/02
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Laqe Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 72Michigan, US |
12/6/02 Sometimes I wish I could strip away sight, so that then I could know what it means To truly see. Erase the masks and facades Eliminate images of deception that trick the eye into love Be done with lust Confusion. See people for who they are... Feel them And what they mean to me. No sight, no vision... Only telepathy Yes, telepathy - For the sound of a voice would give the Devil's game away. Sometimes I wish I could strip away my sense of touch, so that then I could know what it means To truly feel. The senses deceive the mind, heart, and soul. The senses are the only true (d)evil Temptations of the body Distractions for the mind Conspiracy against emotion Hiding truth. Sometimes I wish I could strip away all things of the senses, so that then And only then I could truly be free. [This message has been edited by Laqe (06-15-2003 07:21 PM).] |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions. I can relate to this piece, though without our senses what would life really be? Marilyn. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS! Very interesting first post. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Echo: what a refreshing addition to our boards I love this! Welcome to PIP! Yes - I wish sometimes too that emotions would not overpower Nice Entrance Please check your email for a special greeting! xxoo |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Lage, What a candid write to open with here in Passions! Excellent thoughts captured here. And welcome to Passions. I truly hope you like it as much as I do! I look forward to seeing more of your posts.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
 Enjoyed your first post!! |
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NickTofteland Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 74MN, USA |
Great post to open with here at pip. I too am a new writer on the boards, but can assure you that this is a place to pitch camp and make a home. Welcome. Psalms 20:7 "Some trust in chariots and some in horses, but we trust in the name of the Lord our God." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
welcome! |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
" No sight, no vision... Only telepathy Yes, telepathy -" Now there's a thought! *grin* Welcome to PIP. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Everything that they said, welcome to pip. Jason |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
I wanted to quote the entire poem. This is wonderfully straight forward and to the point. It's an unfortunate situation and I commend you for writing it in depth. *outstanding* Welcome to Passions~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Be done with lust Confusion. a wonderful phrase...reminds me of someone  M |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
yes welcome! I'm w the rest sorry can't type well lately my other hand is in a splint..so pls forgive me 4 the short reponse...If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) Yes, I think without our senses we can indeed feel undisturbed, but then again, do we still really feel free if we can't see or feel? (big hugggssssssss) Think about it just one more time over! This is a fabulous debut, sweet friend, well-done! Welcome to Passions, sweet Echo, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Echo, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Laqe Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 72Michigan, US |
You're definitely a chipper feller, aren't ya? Lol. Thank you everyone who responded. I love this board!! .Echo. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Welcome ARCTIC WIND |
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