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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
A misty morning gray A look upon the wake of yesterday A lark high above Cries loud and clear A cry that seems to be heard Regardless of what has happened I never knew how much How much was in my mind. It’s as though the mist left And I suddenly saw clearly What am I to do? How am I to do it? Who knows now or ever I’ll keep doing what I must But somewhere along the way The mist has returned I am blind now I go about groping for Anything to hold A tree, a branch, a dead stag. Somewhere along the way The grayness returned I continue to grope For the solidity, it might as well be air. A vague glimmer of light Of hope I so long I wish to see that light It seems to be right there I’ll continue to walk To give up would be cowardly In the dark tunnel I’ll keep looking for You my Light. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
filled with feeling. yes it is a pleasure to read |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Search and ye shall find." "Ask and ye shall receive."-- You are searching and asking and when you least expect it, you shall be finding and receiving your soul's desire.  Love & Eternal Light, EA |
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VOE Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 119From the land of Camelot |
And when you least expect it, but need it the most, that light you seek will illuminate your path, my friend! This is a write of courage and hope...well done..~V~ I speak from the Voice Of Experience |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely written and much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
And it's there. It's out there. The light is there. Hang in there and don't give up. Keep writing, too. It's good to get it on the outside, and not keep it in!! The answers are out there. In the Bible it says something like this---there's nothing we go through that isn't common to man. Whatever we experience..someone has already felt it before us...so sometimes it helps to know you're not the only one thats ever been through that situation. I know, I know this was supposed to just be a critique, but my heartstrings get tugged, and can't keep from trying to say a word that might help someone feel better. Sorry if this is too much for you, or the readers. SharaRose @-->-- Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
Posts 101 |
Critique or not, thank you so much for all your words. Indeed, the best one can ever do is keep looking ahead: so I've learned and am learning yet. Cheers  CD |
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