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Aenimal
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the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-07-23 03:05 AM


dreams pour over
filling cracks in mortal shell
fleeting peace
in these fictions I create

until I awaken
to this life and these truths
beneath the shell
the chasm deepens

© Copyright 2003 raphael giuffrida - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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1 posted 2003-07-23 03:36 AM


Raph:

"When I was a child
I caught a fleeting glimpse,
Out of the corner of my eye.
I turned to look but it was gone.
I cannot put my finger on it now.
The child is grown, the dream is gone . . ."

xxoo

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-07-23 03:38 AM


gawd!
Margherita
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3 posted 2003-07-23 05:06 AM


Wonderful .... dreams are the first step to create your reality.
Abbracci.
Margherita

gemjop
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4 posted 2003-07-23 11:31 AM


You get fiction in your dreams? How come? no fair. Mine are a sleeping repeat of the day i've just lived.

loved the last two lines. sigh. aint it the truth.

xxx

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2003-07-23 11:37 AM


May your dreams of sweet become your reality and banish the nightmares of your days.

Warm hugs,
EA

garysgirl
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6 posted 2003-07-23 11:55 AM


What Linda said, Raph!  
Hugs to you  
Ethel

inkedgoddess
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7 posted 2003-07-23 12:23 PM


how do u know that the dream isnt the real
reality when you are dreaming it it is so
vivid at times..where do we go each night, when morning seems to be hazy and the dream so clear....huh, could u tell me?

SEA
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8 posted 2003-07-23 02:04 PM


yes, I have to agree with the inked one.....who says it's fiction??

Aenimal
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9 posted 2003-07-23 02:07 PM


Thanks all, i kinda felt bad posting this..theme's getting redundant I seem to whine about the same things i need new dissapointments lol..
VOE
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From the land of Camelot
10 posted 2003-07-23 02:07 PM


I am really impressed with the images you created here...a sort of abstract, but with much to think about!!!  Great write!!  ~V~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

littlewing
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11 posted 2003-07-23 02:56 PM


and uhhh mine are any different?
sadness despair - freedom
look in my archives:
if one of them doesnt mention flying
flight freedom breeze - then it must
have been a duet or an experiment!

grrr

Ladybug
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since 2003-06-17
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12 posted 2003-07-23 03:05 PM


"beneath the shell
the chasm deepens"

--> Loved this poem, Aenimal.  Very cool


And also enjoyed Littlewing's quote of "Comfortably Numb" -- one of my favorites!

Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end...

Aenimal
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13 posted 2003-07-23 03:20 PM


thanks guys and Sue yeah lol I guess just it's that i wrote a dream poem a day or two ago and it p*ssed me off
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