Open Poetry #27 |
dreams |
Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
dreams pour over filling cracks in mortal shell fleeting peace in these fictions I create until I awaken to this life and these truths beneath the shell the chasm deepens |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph: "When I was a child I caught a fleeting glimpse, Out of the corner of my eye. I turned to look but it was gone. I cannot put my finger on it now. The child is grown, the dream is gone . . ." xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful .... dreams are the first step to create your reality. Abbracci. Margherita |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
You get fiction in your dreams? How come? no fair. Mine are a sleeping repeat of the day i've just lived. loved the last two lines. sigh. aint it the truth. xxx Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May your dreams of sweet become your reality and banish the nightmares of your days. Warm hugs, EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
What Linda said, Raph! Hugs to you Ethel |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
how do u know that the dream isnt the real reality when you are dreaming it it is so vivid at times..where do we go each night, when morning seems to be hazy and the dream so clear....huh, could u tell me? |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
yes, I have to agree with the inked one.....who says it's fiction?? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks all, i kinda felt bad posting this..theme's getting redundant I seem to whine about the same things i need new dissapointments lol.. |
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VOE Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 119From the land of Camelot |
I am really impressed with the images you created here...a sort of abstract, but with much to think about!!! Great write!! ~V~ I speak from the Voice Of Experience |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
and uhhh mine are any different? sadness despair - freedom look in my archives: if one of them doesnt mention flying flight freedom breeze - then it must have been a duet or an experiment! grrr |
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Ladybug Member
since 2003-06-17
Posts 236Massachusetts |
"beneath the shell the chasm deepens" --> Loved this poem, Aenimal. Very cool And also enjoyed Littlewing's quote of "Comfortably Numb" -- one of my favorites! Every new beginning comes from some other beginning's end... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks guys and Sue yeah lol I guess just it's that i wrote a dream poem a day or two ago and it p*ssed me off |
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