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Open Poetry #27

Double Edged Knife

Hockeychick19
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

0 posted 2003-07-22 05:43 PM

Who do you think you are,
Do you think you can leave all these scars,
You think you can play all these games,
Without looking like you put yourself to shame.
Boy you have a lot to learn,
How dare you,
You’re sitting there pretending nothings wrong,
That nothing scares you,
That’s a bold face lie,
Sit down, be a man, and cry,
You can do it, come on don’t be shy.
How do you feel now,
Do you feel like a man,
You say “No.”
Well in that case you put on a great show.

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-07-22 07:19 PM

Wow...very powerful and moving words.
Eric

Hockeychick19
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

2 posted 2003-07-23 09:38 AM

Thank you Eric.

~Kelly~

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-07-23 11:17 AM

Feel better now?--nothing like a good vent!

Warm hugs,
EA

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

4 posted 2003-07-23 11:26 AM

nice to meet you. Yeah, who do they think they are! Some people, you'll never get through to. I know this well. Excellent rage.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

5 posted 2003-07-23 01:16 PM

That's the way to tell 'em, Hockeychick!!!

(Hey, when my Mom gets really mad when she thinks
someone has lied....she's says"that's a bold faced lie")

Hugs to you

Ethel

Hockeychick19
Member

since 2002-10-29

Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA

6 posted 2003-07-23 03:39 PM

Earth Angel, yes I think I feel a lot better now

Gemjop, it's nice to meet you too... You know what, you're right I don't think we'll get through to some people... But hey it's worth a shot... right?

Ethel (a.k.a Garysgirl), yeah mom's can get like that (I know mine does).

Thank you to everyone who read this poem. I wrote it for all the guys out there who need a wake up call, but especially one in particular.

~Kelly~

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