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My Tunnel
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My Tunnel |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough 
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Much can be said about the light at the end of the tunnel ...For me It's more like a slow burn. rather than a beacon to follow. The tunnel? Oh yes, the tunnel. ...seems like a thousand walls each closing in as I fight to follow the light. The light at the end of my tunnel seems to dim, and flicker more often than burn bright. It seems that the longer I follow The farther away it moves. Yes. It moves, into the deep hollows of an unknown void. I call out to the light, because sometimes... I can see it no more. Once again, it flickers and I follow. But for how long must I chase this light, until I finally reach the end of The Tunnel? A woman has got to love a bad man once or twice in her life, to be thankful for a good one. |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
Felt like I was moving Down A tunnel Myself |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific penning,, seeing the lite at the end of the tunnel always brings hope..  |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
But for how long must I chase this light, until I finally reach the end of The Tunnel? Tima, I like the way you did this.  Hugs  Ethel |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Tima...I think I know this tunnel. You've penned it well, my friend. Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
great format! what a treat, something new! and a great theme...often ask myself the same thing |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Great poem, Tima. I hope you find the end of the tunnel soon... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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AnamCara Junior Member
since 2003-06-25
Posts 41Canada |
Nice write! Love, Angela |
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