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Open Poetry #27
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ToRPoR
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0 posted 2003-07-23 08:04 AM


Masts hold rocky sky.
Pregnant stones ooze crystal tears;
cavern of autumn.

Solid sky on hold.
Zinc and copper paint colors;
cavernous refuge.

Stone teeth chew the roof.
Rock bellies breed copper dawn.
Mouth yawns underground.

Castles punch ceiling.
Mountains of glistening hazel.
Hollow rock garden.

Void eats crystal rock.
Copper beams stand in salute,
to time, the sculptor.
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1 posted 2003-07-23 08:11 AM

ToRPoP. I really love these senryu and haiku verses, don't you? They are so much fun to write.
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Ethel

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ToRPoR
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2 posted 2003-07-23 08:45 AM

I surely love Haikus and Senryus. May I have one of your stars to brighten up my lonely nights?
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