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Open Poetry #27
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bklynboy
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since 2002-12-15
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florida
0 posted 2003-07-22 10:37 PM


Lips touching gently
Passion expressed with fervor
Brown eyes smile at blue
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angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
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1 posted 2003-07-22 10:40 PM

Very few words, but I feel the passion ignited by them.I love these kinds of poems as much as I love the perfume.An awesome job.
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vlraynes
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2 posted 2003-07-22 10:47 PM


bklynboy...you did a wonderful job of bringing
the passion alive in just a few well-chosen words.
Nicely done.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson
inkedgoddess
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3 posted 2003-07-22 10:47 PM

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