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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-07-22 08:39 PM


Exotic Views

From my lanai
I see anthurium's,
red gingers,
graceful palms
and silky bamboo.

At times
my sweetheart
joins me too.
In lounge chair
I enjoy exotic
views.

JamesLee
July22
2003
anthurium-nicknamed
"the heart of Hawaii."
lanai-a veranda or open
sided living room.


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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-07-22 08:41 PM


This made me smell pineapple and sea breeze.

mm lovely.


ThisDiamond
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2 posted 2003-07-22 09:22 PM


Oh, well done James!  The breeze, the sea...perhaps a fire on the beach!?!
Great write. TD

angelblueyes
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3 posted 2003-07-22 09:26 PM


James, the mind fills with many pleasant and warm thoughts while reading this.I hope some day to see the beauty of Hawaii.Nicely done.
angelblueyes

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4 posted 2003-07-22 09:57 PM


I am sure it is more than just exotic scenery that your eyes are seeing from that chair. * smile*

Enjoyed.

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5 posted 2003-07-22 11:34 PM


Man...Hawaii sounds wonderful!

I love your descriptive style James!

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6 posted 2003-07-23 12:10 PM



Lovely images here, James.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

dertah
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7 posted 2003-07-23 12:26 PM


righteo job here mate,cheereo.
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8 posted 2003-07-23 12:51 PM


ohhh this is just lovely thanks for the read!
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