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Hostage Rage
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Hostage Rage |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Surely I can't but surely am living this rewind like fool finding the anger strapped up by mouth I shall release and let scream hostage rage You did THIS to me? still it is I who lets this linger I haven't been too tightly wrapped lately furnished house of love song memory reigned the complete set in perfect condition with no sentiment to you So whats the point? there's no room anymore Solo voice fragments you never let me say it all in cold stone echoing cave left me with yours silenced my angers desire hostage rage smothered by pathetic belief that I miss us Released from gunpoint because it keeps me alive I'm ok. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I wish I could paint this on a sign and hammer it on my front lawn. But yanno? He still wouldn't get it. Maybe I should try hammering it into his skull? grin.. How's that for rage? chuckle. Damn I wish I'd written this.  |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
You are ok...more so...you're beautiful. And your words reflect so. Eric |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Solo voice fragments you never let me say it all in cold stone echoing cave left me with yours silenced my angers desire hostage rage smothered by pathetic belief that I miss us Released from gunpoint because it keeps me alive Dear Lady...you just described the final years of my marriage. Every word fits. This has touched me so. And thus, your words are now in my library. Patricia |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Gem, this is absolutely amazing. Your words hit home, and the 'I'm ok' at the end, well.. it's something that echos in the mind, isn't it? |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Solo voice fragments you never let me say it all in cold stone echoing cave left me with yours silenced my angers desire hostage rage smothered by pathetic belief that I miss us Released from gunpoint because it keeps me alive Gemma, sweet girl, I don't know what to say, except that I'm here if you need me.  Hugs  Ethel Mae [This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-22-2003 09:53 AM).] |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
"So what's the point, there isn't any room anymore" Sounds a bit "flat" barely room for one a home like that unsweetened, undone Time for a move somewhere, on your way for you to prove another can stay No doubt in mind your heart, love will find Life is about changes, good or bad there is plenty of sky left!! [This message has been edited by ctowen (07-22-2003 10:08 AM).] |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Karen Yep, try it. anythings worth a crack. BUT, they never will getit. sigh. thanks lady. xxxx Ericc  You always make me smile. Glad you enjoyed my words, however angry they were. xxxxPatricia Thankyou so much. i'm so sorry that this makes sense to you though..but at least its over right? xxxxMeghan Thanks gal. Nope the echo never stops. again, i'm sorry this hit home. i wouldn't wish these feelings upon my worst enemy. xxxx Ethel Mae  you don't have to say anything. your replies ALWAYS give me comfort. Thanks for always being here for me. You're like a second mum to me. xxxxInstant karma's gonna get you. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Craig, thankyooooooou! your words are also ALWAYS a comfort to me. its great having such a wise friend as you. xxxx Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Some people say you don't need to know the reasons or you don't need answers...but I need to come to an understanding to be OK...glad you are ok...James |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
"living this rewind like fool finding the anger strapped up by mouth" Ohhhh how I know this, too. Glad you are OK. Enjoyed |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"Solo voice fragments you never let me say it all in cold stone echoing cave left me with yours silenced my angers desire hostage rage smothered by pathetic belief that I miss us" Gemma...I could hear and feel the rage and the hurt in this piece. You've expressed it well. Big hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
I have to agree with patricia on this.I hope that for all in this situation a light at the end of the tunnel.Very well done and one to add to my library. angelblueyes |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
You did THIS to me? still it is I who lets this linger Isn't that always the way in the end. No matter what a person does in the end it's how we let it affect us. It's like recently, i kwpt telling this annoying british friend of mine to listen to a certain song but she wouldn't listen...ah nevermind..friggin brits griiiiin |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
very nice work here. i love the anger produced by love no less. looking forward to more. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
"You did THIS to me? still it is I who lets this linger" Ain't this the truth? *hugs* to you, you seem to be on the mend |
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