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Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
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New York

0 posted 2003-07-22 04:34 PM



I cry tears in the middle of the
      night.
Unaware of the future.
Despite my happiness I crumble,
as I condemn my heart from
      ever loving you again.
For you I cry these tears,
every night, and  I cry for you.
My Heart My Soul,
In the middle of what seems to
      be lost.
I Love You!
reaches past the honesty of your
      purity.
the deception, the lies.
For you, I cry these tears
      every night for you
and I cry every time I hear your voice
      tender and smoothe
and everytime I look at you
and everytime you look at me
Its like an earthquake
your not sure whether to shatter
      or shake.
In your eyes, I see a love
      that lasts a life time.

                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

© Copyright 2003 Kellie M. Cantrell - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2003-07-22 04:52 PM


Kellie~
Achingly lovely~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Kellie_Cantrell
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since 2002-05-22
Posts 1667
New York
2 posted 2003-07-22 05:00 PM


Marge Tindal-
Thank You. This is the first time I let the pen flow onto the paper and create a poem and then read it over line by line and rearrange it into another poem. It was really to see how much making an effort on poetry is so much more rewarding.
-Kellie

                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
*My poetry website
http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2003-07-22 08:04 PM


Kellie~
Back in for a second read ... your 'effort' paid off honey~

Now for another go 'round~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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Michigan, USA
4 posted 2003-07-22 09:31 PM


A different write for you Kel,
Good job.
LET it flow...TD

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
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Oklahoma
5 posted 2003-07-22 09:34 PM


Kellie, This was great. My interest was caught all the way through.Very well done.
angelblueyes

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