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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now 
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sixty-four Ohhhh ... that Beatles song will you still need me will you still feed me when I'm sixty-four yes we will if we choose to pursue life contrary to rules refusing the norm we do have options we can make choices as to how we wish to spend our moments by living for each opportunity and for each minute stolen out of time why don't we just stop fretting over all crazy boundaries or thoughts of normalcy do you want normal the same old thing with average regards and ordinary days surely not for we bypassed all of that long ago dodging the conventional plus what appeal does that sort of life style the mediocre hold for you and me I think we deserve something more than that a relationship that feeds passion's needs uniquely distinct in our special world in our special way doing as we wish you needing feeding me needing feeding each other in full way past sixty-four Janette |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
yes we will if we choose to pursue life contrary to rules refusing the norm YES! EXACTLY. (beatles fan here by the way.) very much enjoyed your thoughts.  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
The Beatles reference was nice, and the 'needing feeding' was excellent wording. I really liked this and what it had to say about passion, at least to me in my own mind. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sounds like a beautifully unique and special relationship! Sending you both 100th birthday wishes in advance!  Luvs'n hugs, EA |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I know what you're thinking Luv this Sandra |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...I wrote one about the words of this song...but I don't think I ever posted it...I was wondering if any of the Beatles would make it to sixty four...I certainly hope so...both Paul and Ringo seem to be healthy...most importantly I hope they will enjoy the fruits of their labors...James |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
gemjop - thanks for the read and yes the Beatles do have some excellent lyrics and tunes that just seem to last and last. PKreturns - this was indeed about passion ... smart reader ... thank you for leaving me this note. Earth Angel - Ohhhhh, "Happy Birthday" greetings for way way way in advance ... how fun ... thank you. catalinamoon - Of course you know what I am thinking ... *wink* Thanks girl friend. JamesMichael - Oh , please post your Beatles poem for I would love to read it. And fortunately each of these men from that group will live on into eternity with their music. Thank you for stopping by to read me. |
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