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Bathtime daydreams
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Bathtime daydreams |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Different water fills the gap between my contours and the porcelain white Same view laying submerged remembering the exact moment once here before When I thought I knew would have sworn upon oath like naive swept up non believer Funny how you changed my mind but you never proved me wrong. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Funny how you changed my mind but you never proved me wrong." Great line...James |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Ahhh, bathtime is think time.. Staring into the falling water and just trying to enjoy it but there's not much you can do if the sound makes your brain go into overdrive, huh? Loved this, going in my library  |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I wish i had something nice to say..but my brain is seriously fried. they should make 8 hour car rides illegal. i'll come back and read it whenn my brain makes sense again that may take a while  |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
And right you be, smart Lady ... oh how they hate it when we are always right. *grin* |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Funny how you changed my mind but you never proved me wrong You're a genius you know that? Hugs |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
much enjoyed.. Jai |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Gemma, we wuv you....   Ethel Mae |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
when I read the title and saw who it was by, I wondered if I should read it...sounded like a very private write, but hell, what do I know? glad I popped in |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Gem: funny . . . that is where it all occurs indeed . . . Funny how you changed my mind but you never proved me wrong. xxoo |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
lol Gem sorry, i am able to appreciate this now |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Thanks for all the bloomin wonderful replies. You lot are always so supportive, i think i'd die without you. liz, was it a car journey with FAMILY MEMBERS? aaaaaargh! Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
just my mum (aghh..I'm talking like you now  ) pain in the..ahhem yes well i did the rewind thing again..aghh rewinding over and over...everyone in my family was dressed all preppy and I'm sitting here in my army pants and a shirt that says "Miss understood" lol the pants say trouble on them too..anyway well yeah |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
You write while in the tub? I get ideas in the shower, but it is sooooo messy. s.a.g. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
LOL @ you both! mothers, moms, mums, they're lovely, but aaargh, car journeys, mum shurrrruup pleeease. My mum always starts conversations about where i was concieved when we're in the car, she knows I can't get away, and she knows I just don't want to know. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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