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Poet deVine

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since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

0 posted 2003-07-23 02:09 PM

The man of my dreams
Isn’t perfect you know
His face has some flaws
Showing the wild oats of sow

His hair may be thinning
Turning a bit gray
His body may stretch
A bit out this way

But his eyes, my they sparkle
And his smile sure does gleam
He’s quiet when he needs to
But his humor is a scream!

Some may say he’s boring
There’s no flash in his pan
But to me he is just
The perfect man!

VOE
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since 2003-07-10

Posts 119
From the land of Camelot

1 posted 2003-07-23 02:14 PM

Now that is the way I feel about my own guy! And who needs perfection anyway, huh?? This is great, PdV!!! ~V~

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

peppermint35
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since 2000-05-28

Posts 1106
Texas, USA

2 posted 2003-07-23 02:19 PM

Perfection in other humans, such as ourselves, would be b-o-r-i-n-g.. lol

But perfection in the poetic rendition of something like this... ah!!! now that you have down pat

Pepper
"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-07-23 02:22 PM

Um well I got a alot of flaws, 3 grey hairs and a solid belly in the works and all at 27..i'm yer man!!

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

4 posted 2003-07-23 02:25 PM

Raph!! I've waited all my life for a man like you!!! LOL

Thank you all. I'm tired of men who think they are God's gift to women because of their looks. Character stays...looks are fleeting....give me a man with a sense of humor any day!

timothysangel1973

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since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

5 posted 2003-07-23 02:26 PM

So well spoken Sharon! Perfection comes in many different forms for all of us. Mine comes in the form of a man 13 years my senior, who keeps his head shaved because of the gray that pokes through...and I love him just as much now, as I did the first time I saw him (well the first time I saw him I was 12 I think)...he says he remembers seeing me in diapers!

I loved this write, and I read it to him!
You even made him smile, and that's a chore...hehe

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-07-23 02:31 PM

Sharon, exactly . . .
I see the soul first - then the outer layer comes after . . .
made me smile today
thank you
xxoo

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

7 posted 2003-07-23 02:50 PM

I'm that ellusive new look Calvin Klein's been looking for. he's done waif, young it's time for a new look lol

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

8 posted 2003-07-23 03:16 PM

Raph..send me a good picture of you..

Aenimal
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Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2003-07-23 03:18 PM

A good pic? If one's ever taken it's yours lol

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

10 posted 2003-07-23 03:27 PM

Poet deVine - not a whole lot to ask for. H'mmmm, you live in Phoenix right?...

BC

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

11 posted 2003-07-23 03:28 PM

A very loving poem for your Dream Man.

Warm hugs,
EA

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

12 posted 2003-07-23 03:31 PM

I'm here for a while yet...but then I'm on the move. Looking for love in all the wrong places..

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

13 posted 2003-07-23 03:37 PM

a real man has… humor and intelligence…everything else is nothing…it fades away…but these things stay forever…h

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

14 posted 2003-07-23 03:47 PM

Devine you just reminded me of an Eddie murphy bit on SNL Buckwheat sings..Ooking pa nub in all da ong paces ooking pa nub lol sorry

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

15 posted 2003-07-23 03:55 PM

Well, Raph, I'm certainly looking for your 'nub'! LOL

Toerag
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since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

16 posted 2003-07-23 05:17 PM

My hair's not thinning
Though a tad gray
And my body's as fit
As as if teen-aged.

So come on over sweetie!!!

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

17 posted 2003-07-23 05:31 PM

PDV...this was great! Enjoyed. TD

Munda
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since 1999-10-08

Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands

18 posted 2003-07-23 05:41 PM

Can I order one of those deVine? Great write.

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27

Posts 1588
Ohio

19 posted 2003-07-23 06:25 PM

Sounds like a wonderful guy. Now me.......
I want long legs and sexy eyes. Whoa.....LOL
Thanks for sharing
Bon-Bon

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