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Hide, seek and goodbye.
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Hide, seek and goodbye. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Whenever I wasn't to be found I would never be searched for. Once in the dark he lost the substance and I became nothing Blind to my danger forgot I existed only for him Here I trail respect weak resistance I let go today. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
damn gemma...loved all these lines, and the feeling they gave, a bittersweet melancholy sigh |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Letting go can be difficult, but that ending may--and will!!!--mark the beginning of wonderful new experiences. Fly free, Dear One! Loving & healing hugs, EA |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
yes gem . . . it feels good but Godamnn it hurts doesnt it? *shaking head* as always xoo |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Here I trail respect weak resistance I let go today. Gemma, I can only imagine how bad this hurts, even though I've experienced it before. I think it would nearly kill me if I were to break up with Gary. Every time I read one of your poems like this, I think of how I would be feeling if it was me and Gary. Heart hugs to you, my little friend   Ethel |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
it hurts but it does get better, you decide when...lovely write as always...in answer to your question...on a mini vacation with my son, daughter in law and new grandchild...as they came home for a while...oh I cannot tell you how great it was to see them...thank you for asking...have a great day...hugs...Lee J. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
You captured these feelings perfectly.. I am not quite there.. but striving, striving... and your words help.. Pepper |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
1 . . . 2 . . . 3 . . . CLEAR! ZZZZaaaappppppppp! ahhhh breathe . . . |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This hurts... but it also shows strength... I think he's lost more than he's even imagined. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Thanks All.  so much. This one hurts me when I re read it. Reminds me of being with someone, yet feeling so unimportant compared to other needless things. Thanks for being here.  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
i came to read..and thats uhh..really good Gem (I'll try to work on my compliments) |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
gemjop In the painful of this there is strength, written well. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Gem, everything here is from the heart. I appreciate your ability to show us how you feel, and let us relate to that so effortlessly. Beautiful  |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Substance, and the lack of it, is a good source! Only you know when to let go! hugs gemma, gemma |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Fine. to steal a line from you..i am in awe of your exelence... |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Blind to my danger forgot I existed only for him le sigh |
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