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Tunneling The Labyrinth |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Tunneling The Labyrinth ~*Marge Tindal*~ Dipping quill in well-of-ink darker than before Tunneling a labyrinth of thoughts needing explore Reaching dead-end chasms that I must either vault tear down or go around Slowly, slowly I feel the darkness closing in I turn to run ...............run .................run slamming headfirst into inking blotches reaching out with spidered fingers grasping the quill draining my will drowning me in blackest ink~ *Kethry ... these were the thoughts that came with 'labyrinth'* ~Thanks sweetie~ July 2003 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge/sis...I feel like I have explored this dark place lately, also. I understand and love you too! Thanks Kethry for the dark ink in Marge's pen.  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge...yes...I know this dark place too. You've written it beautifully. Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Dear Marge, I needed to stop for another read of this wonderful piece. Yes, I know of which you write. Keep letting you words flow...you penned a magnificent write. Patricia |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Marge... I believe we have all visited this place at one time or another. ~Heart Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Tunneling the Labyrinth"--a very creative way of expressing such moments! Luvin' hugs, Linda |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
Let the ink flow...and use the pen to polevault over those dead-end chasms.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"grasping the quill draining my will drowning me in blackest ink~" This I like sweet Marge...(well I like everything you pen) ...I can be twisted and confused a lot of times, but for some reason...this made me think of my writer's block..hehe I see that you certainly don't have that problem!  A woman has got to love a bad man once or twice in her life, to be thankful for a good one. -Majorie Kinnan Rawlings- [This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-22-2003 03:14 AM).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Thanks to each of you for your kind comments~ I write the thoughts of many muses ... appreciative for each inspire that comes my way~ Think I'm exploring a series of dark (?)... 'Peel Of Reveal' ... don't ask ... it just comes and I have no mission but to write it~ Time seems to want to move on and I need to capture the moments in my penning~ Bear with me ... I will still 'make the time' to touch the tender beauties of life while it is touchable~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Dear Marge: Reminds me of wandering in old, underground mining tunnels in Nevada. It was scary but exciting too! Your poem has the same quality. Great atmosphere! Love Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
Its not easy using 'labyrinth' in a poem. Good job. I've been in a labyrinth of thoughts too, I relate. |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Great write! Eric |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, love the blackest of inks in this it's dark enough for my liking and gothic enough for yours. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
different...very good! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Reaching dead-end chasms that I must either vault tear down or go around Whatever the color of your ink, you write for many... and do it with excellence. *S* |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
You all are just the greatest~ Thank you for bearing with me as I tunnel~ Kethry ... thanking you most of all for letting the thought flow my way~ I love ya'~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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