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Open Poetry #27

Jewel

LastMoments
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 92

0 posted 2003-07-23 11:29 PM

Until the time subsides itself
And makes the wish i crave
The last whispers to a day
Remain the time inside delay
And until we meet again
The stars will shine above
To paint the world in sparkles
And claim the day as love

And until the gathering
My heart stands incomplete
Without your hand to enclose
The broken chains inside
And if for reasons I can't name
That I can't come beside
Let the world take my name
For this one final cry

Destiny can make the world
But you can take my breath
And this time can make the end
But still I can't forget
The single look inside your eyes
That makes me live again
Let me take you to this place
With no real end
Let us write the tail
Of where hearts can mend

And in my hands I cradle you
And watch you shine beyond
Cause in my hands you are the jewel
That makes me forever

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-07-23 11:31 PM

This is great.The sadness, the happiness, the warmth that this person makes you feel.You are truly amazing.
angelblueyes

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-07-24 04:56 AM

Enjoyed...James

LastMoments
Member

since 2003-03-07

Posts 92

3 posted 2003-07-24 10:37 AM

Thanks. It kind of relates to liking someone enough to thinking you can trust them, yet you'd be giving them a broken heart, which in time you feel could heal

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