Slendering of Will and Wishes (creative challenge)

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Open Poetry #27

Slendering of Will and Wishes (creative challenge)

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-07-21 07:32 PM

My thoughts ellipse
Falling synclinal
Always to become
Pearls on velvet

Beaded cheeks
Sun bronzed smoothe
And Always
Warm

Copyright Kkh 7/21/03

[This message has been edited by ThisDiamond (07-21-2003 08:28 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2003-07-21 07:48 PM

OMG Kathleen!
This is so beautiful!!
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
Has held me in the same embrace~

Martie

Moderator

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

2 posted 2003-07-21 08:19 PM

TD

Pearls on velvet...what beauty you paint with these few words.

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

3 posted 2003-07-21 08:24 PM

Kathleen, you have created a beautifuly crafted poem...

believe in what your heart feels...

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

4 posted 2003-07-21 09:27 PM

TD,
Your images are incredible with the feel silk.

So lovely!

Patricia

AnamCara
Junior Member

since 2003-06-25

Posts 41
Canada

5 posted 2003-07-21 10:57 PM

...lovely expressions.

Love,
Angela

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

6 posted 2003-07-21 11:01 PM

Oh..I love the imagery in this piece.
Just lovely, TD.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-07-22 12:08 PM

Kathleen, this is beautiful.

Hugs

Ethel

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