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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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A kick for the wrench in stomach deep, Physical pain solace upon the wound would be nice. Instead I'm still here loosened bolt upright, The comb still leaves tangled years of you, No matter how I try and rid you out this head. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
The comb still leaves tangled years of you, No matter how I try and rid you out this head. this is brilliant gem the perfect imagery.. [This message has been edited by Aenimal (07-21-2003 03:03 PM).] |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
you are the....ehh good poet person. yeah! go Gemma |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
One word in American slang: "cool". |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Jesus Gem . . . never would have thought of using a comb (edited by myself) brilliant! amazing . . . xxoo |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
The comb still leaves tangled years of you, No matter how I try and rid you out this head. Gemma, you are good, little lady. Sorry that I didn't reply to this before now. I turn my computer off when the thunderstorms come to visit every afterneoon. Loveya    Ethel Mae |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"The comb still leaves tangled years of you, No matter how I try and rid you out this head." Maybe you should use that "No More Tears" shampoo!  |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
clever you  |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Very good..clever little english woman....well done gem...and thanks... Goldenrose |
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