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garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

0 posted 2003-07-21 11:14 AM

Photo From Webshots

~~*~~
Where oh where
does the time go
Especially when the
days drag by so slow

Another year has
almost gone by
Where did it go to
I wonder with a sigh

Soon Christmas time
will be right here
When all are celebrating
with ones we hold dear

I guess this is why
things happen so fast
It is good we have memories
that we can depend on to last

Especially when they are
of the happy good kind
They are all around us
if we look hard will find

Let us cherish our memories
we make from day to day
Before the day is gone
and like a bird flies far away
~~*~~

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-21-2003 03:06 PM).]

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-07-21 11:17 AM

you allready know what I think about time..lol. You are so sweet Ethel Mae..I love saying that, it's so true

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

2 posted 2003-07-21 11:39 AM

I guess this is why
things happen so fast
It is good we have memories
that we can depend on to last

Hello my lovely! Ethel Mae, they do last don't they. I cant decide at them moment if its a good or bad thing. i know in the long run it'll be a good thing.

Muchos love
gemxxx

ToRPoR
New Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 9

3 posted 2003-07-21 11:40 AM

Very touchy, very lovely. Much enjoyed.

I am no expert, but I have only 2 small comments:

Maybe add some punctuation?

And in the following part, maybe you can avoid repeating the word "with"?

Soon Christmas time
will be right here
With all celebrating
with ones we hold dear

Just suggestions, mind you. Great piece. Thank you.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-07-21 11:43 AM

Ethel,
Good memories are a treasure.

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-07-21 11:46 AM

Ethel:

I love the birds . . .
and yes God I still
feel like am 25 (wishing)
Although, the thought of
Christmas depresses me lol
Reminds me of time by Enya
xxoo

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

6 posted 2003-07-21 12:28 PM

I think we all catch ourselves saying this. Reminiscing memories that seem to slip away if not for memories that linger, and thank God for that. Loved reading this. Made me think of the times I've had the same thoughts.

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2003-07-21 12:29 PM

and the valentines day cards are in the stores
the day after christmas........and who is responsible for this insanity of reminding us
even more that we are all victims, all rats
on a treadmill
btw, before i go off on a tangent, nice ethel, real nice

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

8 posted 2003-07-21 12:44 PM

Yes Ethel and the older I get , the quicker time seems to go !! the aging process i cannot seem to slow LOL

We should make every moment count
Hope

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

9 posted 2003-07-21 12:48 PM

Another lovely post Ethel. You are so right. Time passes by much too quickly. Remember though, when we were youngsters and we couldn't wait for the years to pass so that we would be "grown ups" .....lol. Dear me.
hugs to you sweet lady, Chris

"At one glance
I love you
With a thousand hearts."

— Mihri Hatun, Turkish poet

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

10 posted 2003-07-22 12:43 PM

Liz, thanks, little lady

.
Gemma, thanks, I appreciate you.

.
RoRPoR, Thanks for your suggestions. I
changed the first "with" you suggested. I
don't like to add puntuation, though,
unless absolutely necessary. I think it
makes it look kind of cluttered. Thanks anyway.

.
.
Hugs to you all

Ethel

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

11 posted 2003-07-22 12:55 PM

Seymour, they are, aren't they? Thanks.

.
Sue, thanks. I love Enya and that song, too.

.
SharaRose, Thanks you. I'm really glad
that you liked it.

.
.
I appreciate you all.

Hugs to each of you

Ethel

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

12 posted 2003-07-22 12:59 PM

Michele, thank you. And you are so right
about the rat race!! I appreciate you, lady.

.
Hope, you are so right. We should make
every moment count. Thanks.

.
Chris, oh I know. When I was a teen-ager, I couldn't
wait to be twenty-one. Thank you.

.
.
I appreciate ya'll so much.

Hugs to each of you

Ethel

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