Open Poetry #27 |
Caress |
ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
A wisp, nothing more across such endless endings striking to its core Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02 |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
you've described it perfectly..every line so deeply into the senses...and in so few words.. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
A clever take on the caress...and even powerfully so as a senryu....I'm saving this~ Melissa Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
Very well in touch with a spiritual essence. Not to mention the air of mysterious subliminal info. I like it very much. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Sigh... xxxx |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very much enjoyed Craig! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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scorpio Member Ascendant
since 2002-10-02
Posts 5178right...there |
A caress is much more than a tactile sensational...it goes much deeper like this poem.. believe in what your heart feels... |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I love when you write these, so much affect, with so little words...passion at its finest.... Lauren~ The way you move me |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Yes...I like this very much. Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
only a wisp matters at that moment nothing more |
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