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ctowen
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Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-07-15 04:28 PM


A wisp, nothing more
across such endless endings
striking to its core

Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure.   -   C. Belville 02

© Copyright 2003 C. Thomas Owen - All Rights Reserved
Kahlil
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1 posted 2003-07-15 11:05 PM



you've described it perfectly..every line so deeply into the senses...and in so few words..

Honeybee
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Ontario, CANADA
2 posted 2003-07-15 11:57 PM


A clever take on the caress...and even powerfully so as a senryu....I'm saving this~

Melissa

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

JaiOfHeaven
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California, Usa
3 posted 2003-07-16 01:37 AM


Very well in touch with a spiritual essence. Not to mention the air of mysterious subliminal info. I like it very much.
gemjop
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Pencilveinia, USA
4 posted 2003-07-21 08:20 PM


Sigh...

xxxx

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
5 posted 2003-07-21 08:22 PM


Very much enjoyed Craig!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

scorpio
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right...there
6 posted 2003-07-21 08:27 PM


A caress is much more than a tactile sensational...it goes much deeper like this poem..

believe in what your heart feels...

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Member Rara Avis
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In Your Poetic Mind
7 posted 2003-07-22 12:57 PM


I love when you write these, so much affect, with so little words...passion at its finest....


Lauren~

The way you move me
I walk with your shadow
With your silhouette
Leave the light on
It always comes
Back to you

vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
8 posted 2003-07-22 01:07 AM



Yes...I like this very much.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"My friends are my estate."
~Emily Dickinson

passing shadows
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displaced
9 posted 2003-07-22 04:31 AM


only a wisp matters at that moment
nothing more

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