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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Heavy dust lays heavy in an un-kept life and reasons to rearrange have long vacated the premises |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...powerful words. Eric |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Some times it is easier to let the dust get thick enough to roll it up like a rug. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
another keeper from you Hel.  Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
Heavy are the words you write, brief...but all the more powerful. |
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Ramon Junior Member
since 2003-07-22
Posts 28 |
short and sweet. There's got to be a lotta dust. :-) |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Helen, this is heavy.  Hugs to you, lady  Ethel |
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AnamCara Junior Member
since 2003-06-25
Posts 41Canada |
...the wisdom in such powerful words, they have reached far. Love, Angela |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
1slick_lady Decisions made take few words. Good write. |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"and reasons to rearrange have long vacated the premises" These few words speak in magnitude Lady! Wonderful write here. |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
There you go . . . into my head again . . . dang |
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