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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2003-07-21 04:38 AM


Hearing your voice thrills me,lifts me to a higher plain.
Different worlds we live in,one voice we share, thaughts the same.

Like a ghost you haunt my mind,through night AND day.

Feeling your prescence near me, your beating heart, beating slowly.

When i smell vanilla i turn sharply to see if you are behind me.

How i would hold you to me,keep you totaly mine, selfishly.

Sweet natured, kind and considerate you are my precious, my world.

Throughout all the days of my life, you are the one i want to hold.

Women of beauty what have you done?
My life is tormented,my love i want you to feel.

Let us be together i implore you,may we meet soon, with each other our life can be unreal.

Dreams of you are perfection,how i would love you and keep you,with love undying.

My heart would be yours forever,our love will be stronger each day.
Sweet, deep, overflowing, love unending.

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passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2003-07-21 04:49 AM


Gosh! how could she decline?
what a longing write, filled with passion!

Goldenrose
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2 posted 2003-07-21 04:51 AM


Why thank you Dixie for your kind words.....

Goldenrose.

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2003-07-23 05:35 AM


Your words are food for my heart,

Such passion, such love I feel from each one,

One of the worlds greatest treasures is your love...displayed for me through your poetry!

This was so unique and I loved the way you used it!
One of my favorites! (of course all of them are favorites of mine)

xxx Love, Thy Vermilion Queen

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-23-2003 05:38 AM).]

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
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Pencilveinia, USA
4 posted 2003-07-23 07:50 AM


How i would hold you to me,keep you totaly mine, selfishly.

Sweet natured, kind and considerate you are my precious, my world.

she is isnt she. Love reading your soft words of devotion to eachother.

much love
gem xxx

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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