Open Poetry #27 |
Gifted |
inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
blowing winds scatter sands i hang on relentlessly to the dream of your kiss again, even the unyielding dunes stir up love's ashes thought to be long silenced, on the random kindness of the wind i am gifted again by your echo [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-14-2003 11:49 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write,,,,,,,,, QjQ |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
thank goodness to the reverberations of romance |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool...cool... |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Brings back memories of passion on the dunes. Do you ever write stuff that doesnt stir feelings, even those thought to be long forgotten? |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I hold onto dreams such as this...once you enjoy a nice kiss you always want another... and I dream of desired first kisses...James |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
on the random kindness of the wind i am gifted again by your echo Oooooooooo girlielocks... how sweet this is!!! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for reading bboy, glad to evoke this feeling from you; something about the beach, i think u said, you know it well too....... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
inkedgoddess - tender and lovely... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nice...gentle and loving. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh, I like this.... and may you always hear that echo -- until the exact moment when you don't need to hear it any more.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Beautiful writing lately Mish but then it always was..missed it so |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele: the wind replying . . . very nice and the shifting of the sands hmmmm . . . as always - xxoo |
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christian Member
since 2002-12-18
Posts 331 |
echo. beautiful, echo. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Lovely ARCTIC WIND |
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