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......10 PiEcE PuZzLe......
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......10 PiEcE PuZzLe...... |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? 
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......10 PiEcE PuZzLe...... a living 10 piece puzzle i am 1 piece that reflects the other 9 my sublime mind, refined from the visual signs of troubled times aged thoughts collect dust, my heart pumps trust & pride porcelean eyes that dont blink,.......their desensitized eyes that realize our worlds foreshadowed demise a father i am who struggles so much but remains suttle learning to ignore ignorance..withold harsh rebuttals patiently waiting & creating a new me a puzzle assembled with simplicity only 10 pieces that complete me .......my kids,my life,family,poetry, and friends....... the main 5 that mend my past sins and better the other 5 parts that combine to make 10 .......my feelings,my heart,thoughts,fears,accomplishments....... after these fade, my life is past tense, confident of my futuristic intent scared of failing & defeat being highlights of my rememberance i embrace my puzzle.. 10 pieces held divided between two fists frayed and worn out pieces...failing to fit into one palm to co-exist experience of being reassembled time and again..repetitiousness dismantled due to struggles i am a living 10 piece puzzle |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
I like the way you think, young fella...like it very much. And the way you write......yep, that too! But the way you think, that's the key. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
outstanding I'll keep this one, to read again. Loved the way you zeroed in on real world aspects of love and identified and accepted the most important things in your life. |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
glad u liked this one... i just decided to sit down and write out my feelings and stuff.. and the whole puzzle thing just came to me....glad ya like how i think... appreciate the feedback |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 good write |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Good Write Indeed ARCTIC WIND |
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