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Virgins |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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Bathe with me, naked,in a sea of newborn leaves brushing fresh paint on a tainted ground. Sing in prayer with me, on the bridge to morning burying dark voices in a choir of the angels sound. Inscribe with me, on pristine pages scriptures of holy innocence, joy in the purest of love to surround. Speak with me not yet of demons; lets lay here, fragile as virgins, enchanted flowers, born again lovers, with the halos we've found. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
beautiful thought mish but if it's all the same I'd rather get me some...kidding you know i l#ve this..back to innocence and fig leaves [This message has been edited by Aenimal (07-20-2003 11:21 AM).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
hehe Raph put a lid on it!  Since you're Mr. Exotic, go strut yer stuff in downtown T.O.!Now this poem is art, I really love the sentiment to this, and I think most women will appreciate what you are conveying here: The pureness of love and the romanticism is probably what most women are searching for. This is a keeper~ Melissa Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele, this is eternal beauty . . . Beauty which many have had the chance of seeing . . . Left me with peace . . . you describe it with the passion and innocence it so deserves . . . xxoo |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
this is beautiful...i wish i could write like this... |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Michelle - sounds good to me. Love your style of writing... BC |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michele, this is really pretty..... with an innocent feeling about it.  Hugs  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...love that last line! |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
This is truly beautiful.It speaks vloumes.You did an awesome job. angelblueyes |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Do you ever notice that Raph counts love as a swear word? he bleeps it out... haha Wow, this was fabulous, and very sweet. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
loved the imagery in this, and the message |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is really nice...James |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Being a virgin myself, born again, that is!--I loved this piece and it is a   Namaste, EA |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
raf.spoken like a man thanks honeybee...yes, you are right about that, if it's out there sue..yes, i knew you could relate and appreciate being the woman that you are kahlil..thank you for the nice words angel..thanks and welcome to PIPS wind...thanks for breezing through, and yes whats up with that raf? bill...its always a pleasure when you stop by ethel...yes, that is it exactly dixie..glad you liked that, i saved it for the end |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Very peaceful and calming. Enjoyed! |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
Absolutely amazing I loved this & omg the beuatiful imagery Mike |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
excellent,,,  |
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