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Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-11 10:38 PM

He keeps me locked inside my head,
I can think but can't speak,
bound by his intuitive thread..
But I..
I like it.

My lips are stuck together
like I'm keeping a secret.
I hushed my body on yours,
my dreams are still warm in this bed.
I've been captivated in between
screams to be free..
Still sending letters, though you're next to me.

Remembering how I wanted to scream out,
tell you about
this song I'd heard on the radio
that keeps getting stuck in my head..

But I..
I like it.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-06-12 01:55 PM

Meghan...

I don't think I have the words...
all I can say is
thank you.

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

2 posted 2003-06-12 03:24 PM

hey

i liked reading your poems keep up the good work

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

Joe Houck
Member

since 2001-04-23

Posts 324
california

3 posted 2003-06-12 04:06 PM

I really enjoyed this. This one's going to stick in my head for a while like a new song on the radio. "But I, I like it". Good stuff.
Joe

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2003-06-12 04:39 PM

My lips are stuck together
like I'm keeping a secret.
I hushed my body on yours,
my dreams are still warm in this bed.
I've been captivated in between
screams to be free..
Still sending letters, though you're next to me.

love these lines....

very nicely done.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-06-13 02:19 PM

cool write!

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

6 posted 2003-07-23 07:43 PM

god. i missed this first time round.
and i..love it.

into my library.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

7 posted 2003-07-23 07:44 PM

thank you Meg for writing it, thank you gem for bumping it. This one was well worth reading

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

8 posted 2003-07-23 08:44 PM

But I...like it too.

You've got a nice style and I'm rather scarce these days but find myself searching you out when I am here.

Enjoyed.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

9 posted 2003-07-23 09:12 PM

I'm with gem I don't know how i missed this the first time around and sorry I did.

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