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Ericc
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0 posted 2003-07-19 03:30 PM



In a world of shallow
waters -

We could be an ocean.

There is something unexplored
between us.

It is the depth...of what
we might be.

If only...

In another world.



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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-07-19 03:32 PM


Yep, knew I'd enjoy this.

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2003-07-19 04:53 PM


sigh
JamesMichael
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3 posted 2003-07-19 05:19 PM


Many times I needed another world...James
risingphoenix
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4 posted 2003-07-19 05:25 PM


interesting, so many themes can be construed fom this, not sure if that is good or bad...
Patricia
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Missouri
5 posted 2003-07-19 07:05 PM


Eric,

This is perfect. I know exactly what this means to me and it fits my present world perfectly.

Excellent write.

Patricia

Margherita
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6 posted 2003-07-19 07:09 PM


Wonderful Eric ... to be aware of the depth of what we might be opens the doors to the unexplored and we just might plunge in ...... to know what we are. In our world.
Love, Margherita

littlewing
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7 posted 2003-07-20 04:42 AM


God Erci
story of my life

If only...

In another world.

beautiful
xxoo

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8 posted 2003-07-20 11:29 AM


Eric, there is such longing in this one.
I enjoyed reading it.  
Hugs  
Ethel

Etain
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9 posted 2003-07-20 06:26 PM


By your side,
I really love this,
your words open a door
to a strange beauty.
Hugs,
Etain.

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2003-07-20 06:28 PM


Exploring those kinds of depths can transport you to another world...

Warm hugs,
EA

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
11 posted 2003-07-20 06:35 PM


Beautiful..very beautiful!!
~Hugs~

~The breeze that kissed you on the face,
    Has held me in the same embrace~

peppermint35
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12 posted 2003-07-21 03:04 AM


another world or another time.. you wrote this with so much feeling     

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
   Percy Bysshe Shelley

AnamCara
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13 posted 2003-07-21 11:30 PM


beyond this world

there will be no sipping

I will take you in

...completely.

Love,
Angela

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Somewhere out there~
14 posted 2003-07-21 11:40 PM


Lovely!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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