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Open Poetry #27

When time doesn't move...

zenny
Member

since 2002-11-24

Posts 371
Belgium

0 posted 2003-07-18 05:18 PM

As lovers begged to freeze the time
on moments when there love's sublime
I knew a man with lack of trust
who attained to fill ones eyes with dust

On moments when you expected least
this lovely man became a beast
Deserting me, his own blood and flesh
addicted to booze, he's spending all cash

So now I reseign where time doesn't run
I live in the shadows, but do miss the sun
The darkness is growing, I'm losing all hope
if only he could not reach to that dope

But that's just a wish to never come true
'cause he can't let go of that evil brew
I do ask the sun to shine upon me
to give me the courage to look out and see

[This message has been edited by zenny (07-18-2003 05:26 PM).]

x8x_bigmike
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since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

1 posted 2003-07-18 05:30 PM

i can feel your pain in this, and it sad that ive been on both sides of this one...I am sorry for your pain, as I am sorry for putting someone else through that pain...for me it was the realization of the feelings you expressed here, that forced me to deal with my past problems...I appreciated your courage to be so candid.

Mike

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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

2 posted 2003-07-18 07:28 PM

It takes much courage to express this kind of sorrow. All prayers to you, and know that the sun has already claimed you. TD

Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-07-18 07:49 PM

nice

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