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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
daily my conscience a genie thats springs forth, a crystillian cloud full, sparkling bright forbiden words slithered though pursed lips "there has to be a way" but while i stay lost in futile prospect he stands vigilant his response inaudible for his words fall on wax corked ears mindfully rationalizing. He is a siren trying to steal my hopes of ressurection while she is no longer my loves muse in her remanents lay a corpse to beatifull to bury [This message has been edited by x8x_bigmike (07-18-2003 08:33 AM).] |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
Mike... This reminds me a little of an old "Pogo" cartoon strip..In it, Pogo waxes political and says "We have met the enemy , and they are us" It seems you are in an ancient battle here with your conscience...The "he" is really you,(possibly your spirit) you speak of? * "he stands vigilant his response inaudible for his words fall on wax corked ears mindfully rationalizing" * but the "ratioalizing" is made fruitless by the reality of the last stanza, where you succumbe to the real world facts that lie outside of your daydream.. * Great poetry, love it.......ice |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
x8x Well done, enjoyed the read. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Amazing..extremely well done and much enjoyed! ~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~ ~ I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before ~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is wonderful. It is indeed the eternal struggle, and you write of it well, as is everything I've read of yours so far. Intelligent and graceful. I'll be reading more of you.  |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Interesting write Mike...I tried to email ya...but your email addy is insufficient?..LOL |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
here is my [email protected] _____________________________ |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
This is a very interesting poem, Mike. Thank you for your nice response on my poems.  Hugs  Ethel |
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