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Open Poetry #27

Maybe

P.R.C
Junior Member

since 2003-01-31

Posts 40
Hull, England

0 posted 2003-07-18 05:16 PM

Maybe when my hair gets darker
when my eyes change colour
Maybe when I'm a little taller
when I'm thinner
Maybe when I become normal
when the world is peaceful
Maybe when no one dies
when there is no hate
Maybe when the earth becomes flat
when the sun doesnt shine anymore
Maybe when the day no longer turns into night
when the rain doesnt fall
Maybe when nothing is the same
when there is no one else
Maybe then I will be good enough
Maybe, just maybe, you will want me then

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-07-18 05:21 PM

There is so poignant and tender...beautiful.
Eric

x8x_bigmike
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

2 posted 2003-07-18 05:25 PM

It will pass...and when you can express the pain like you have...you will know it when it comes again...while i dont think that would make me feel better..and it didnt about 2 months ago for me...in the end as the seasons pass, you will find this world of opportunity

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Brad Majors

Member Elite

since 2001-04-03

Posts 2647
Georgia

3 posted 2003-07-18 07:47 PM

I like it!

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