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Open Poetry #27

forgotten winds

Gavin
Junior Member

since 2003-06-22

Posts 47

0 posted 2003-07-18 07:53 PM

the fire's sun burns the morning's dew,
igniting the icy resin
and bleaching the sky blue,
so the wind now knows not where to go,
as it twists and it turns
back into the snow,
only to die an unconscious death
asleep and forgotten
with no dieing breath,
a memory of memories
lost in the path,
this road of destruction,
a road of forgotten's past

so if it were up to the light
to wake the world once again
how come it left the sky so blue
but gave no existence to the wind

j0n4th4n
Member

since 2003-03-11

Posts 94

1 posted 2003-07-18 08:11 PM

i haven't really understood you,but theres some wonderful style to this poem, just need to develop it a little

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