Legend Of The Crystal Heart ..part 2

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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2003-07-18 02:10 AM

Aegean arose ,his face a glow,
This vision of beauty warmed his heart,
touched his mind, his soul,

She reached for his hand, placed it upon her face,
He knew instantly, she was the chosen one,
One who evil will be replaced,

Upon his black horse they rode, she leading the way,
His body tightly she did hold,
As the horse galloped and started to sway,

She took him to the dark cavern where the heart layed, as she opened the golden box, she touched the heart, light it displayed,

words appeared across it, Mirabelle, was the name,
The knight pulled out of his pocket, another heart that was the same,

Together the hearts connected, glowing amber bright, Evil and darkness disappeared across the land, day turned to night,

Every heart returned to innocence, every soul saved from evil, Today inside the land of Knor, upon the castle hill,

The one who still reigns, King Aegean, and Queen Mirabelle

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen,
but with the ink of their heart~

[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (07-18-2003 02:54 AM).]

passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-07-18 02:34 AM

into the library!

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2003-07-18 03:00 AM

Thanks again Dixie! your a kind soul!
needed the great encouragement especially today!

Thanks~ARH

JaiOfHeaven
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since 2003-04-12

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California, Usa

3 posted 2003-07-18 04:19 AM

Keep writing girl.
Your awesome.
Should write a novel or somethin.
You have the gift.

Jai

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
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4 posted 2003-07-18 04:50 AM

fabulous write n read,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 2003-07-18 05:22 AM

Thanks Jai...for the great compliment! maybe I will...

QjQ...Thank you for your words!

Thanks~ ARH

SongVixen
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since 2003-07-06

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6 posted 2003-07-18 05:52 AM

WOW! what a read, now I must read part one.going to find it you should write novels indeed!

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

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7 posted 2003-07-18 09:27 AM

This was a fantastic trilogy...brilliantly and imaginatively written.....you should do more of these my love.....

love Goldenrose.xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

[This message has been edited by Goldenrose (07-18-2003 09:28 AM).]

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

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8 posted 2003-07-18 06:48 PM

Thius is really beautiful...so romantic.
I really enjoyed reading it.

Hugs

Ethel

A Romantic Heart
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9 posted 2003-07-19 11:26 PM

Gold~my love thak you as always you words are fuel to my flame, and loves arrow to my heart!You encourage me and inspire me.Maybe we could write a novel together and get it published? a thought...

xxx Love ~ARH

Ethel~ thanks again, glad you liked it!

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