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Dear Daddy& Those were the days
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Dear Daddy& Those were the days |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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*Those were the days.* vocies within tell me how things will begin i still find myself asking what to do with my life i think once more,even twice...still i am trapped in my mind torn by another. rembering how it was nice and easy when i was just a youngster,no complications or having to make any elimatnations. no hearts to break,no more tears to be shed over men. ahh those were the days where my only worry was what do i play... *A Letter To Dad* Dear daddy why dont we get along why do you hate me so please tell me dad why oh why oh why I love you even though you dislike me I miss you and sorry for things i have done to you Dear daddy i try and be good for you i try to be a star for you wont you call me to We had many fun times together you made me laugh you made me cry it hurts so much to say goodbye Dear Daddy oh how i wish i can be what you want dad,i love you so you should know so i will go.... good bye daddy.....yer little girl is gone... Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really enjoyed these. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
thank you very much  Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Nice write foxey one...wish my dad was here to write to.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This pulls at my harp strings. This is such a plaintive plea for love and understanding. Are you going to give this letter to your Dad? Perhaps it might help to mend the fences. Warm hugs, Earth Angel |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
no,i doubt it,im 21 year's old. If any of you knew my dad,he wouldent care if i gave that to him. i basically wrote it to try to make peace with the negativity i have towards him. Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I hear you loud and clear! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed..... ARCTIC WIND |
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