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To Weave a Basket
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To Weave a Basket |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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To Weave a Basket The marsh twilight deep staining feet across the stone bridge I to keep there filigree of music starts to weave a basket of my heart Such variant day in wind a change touched by opening package lain alive from powder’s fragile mist across the whispered light of kiss I go there to the cave of be all lit from reflected waters three one rippled softly from my breath one still as never moving chest The third reflects the inside view all dappled sunlight shadow hued with sweet of longing bending near a drop in time spread out in tear I pull the plug within my soul to empty cobwebs staining goal and there in feathered imagery I catch a hint of destiny It like a coral ocean floor distributes time through moonlit door to see it sow imagining and mend hurt flower fragmenting Hold it up ‘tis sweet as sky studded star sung lullaby A canopy of slanted light reflected from the fire of sight Pull time across the plains of earth into waterfalls exploding mirth then watch the healing from the wound of drinking drought by time perfumed It’s plain as dirt on cavern floor and light as whispered evermore all parts be held or felt in clasp from answered wisdom of the past It is what stillness brings around and listening pulls from warming found in opening life times mending seam to shake out dust from field of dreams The marsh twilight deep staining feet across the stone bridge I to keep there filigree of music starts to weave a basket of my heart ----- from 10-01 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The third reflects the inside view all dappled sunlight shadow hued with sweet of longing bending near a drop in time spread out in tear You are a wonder of words my dear Martie~ interwoven into the heart of this poet~ Thank you for your soft touch, it is lovely. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
How DO you do this? All twilite and filigree Powder, mist and whispers Damn! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"I pull the plug within my soul to empty cobwebs staining goal and there in feathered imagery I catch a hint of destiny It like a coral ocean floor distributes time through moonlit door to see it sow imagining and mend hurt flower fragmenting Hold it up ‘tis sweet as sky studded star sung lullaby A canopy of slanted light reflected from the fire of sight" Martie...this touches and gently tugs at my heart. Another beauty, my friend. Hugs to you...  "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful Martie.. Reads like a whisper..so soft and gentle. Teach me how to do this...how I wish I knew how. ~Soft smiles & hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I pull the plug within my soul to empty cobwebs staining goal and there in feathered imagery I catch a hint of destiny It like a coral ocean floor distributes time through moonlit door to see it sow imagining and mend hurt flower fragmenting With the most delicate touch, you pull our hearts into your weave... This is magnificent, Martie. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie You write like the fragrance of a flower. Love it.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You, Dear One, are yourself a master weaver of words!   EA |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DearestAndSweetestSister-Of-My-Heart~ This is elegantly woven~ I love you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
It is what stillness brings around and listening pulls from warming found in opening life times mending seam to shake out dust from field of dreams The marsh twilight deep staining feet across the stone bridge I to keep there filigree of music starts to weave a basket of my heart Oh, Martie, this is so beautiful and touched me so that I don't even know what to reply. Me, speechless? But, it's so. :heart; Hugs to you, sweet lady Ethel |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
whoo....I love the inspiration I get here. Martie you are truly wonderful. the soft touch was appreciated...my heart feels on high. Jai |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - my heart sings with the basket you weave - my souls criues for more of this poetry that flows over me as I read - you write magic over and over and...love them all - Paul |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
I assume you live somewhere in northern california, your environmental imagery is amazing...when I read your poetry, and the way you set the stage .. like marshes here...i think of muir woods...you have the ablity to take me back just by nature of your description..exellent work |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Enjoyed this very much. This is like a song. I just like it. |
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