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Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

0 posted 2003-07-11 09:48 PM

Candle
in a saucer
a delicate lady
her smile has gone to wax now
darkness

Stretching
to forever
when I reach out my hand
beyond you I touch the world
cannot

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2003-07-11 10:08 PM

One cannot read easily
poetry of Martie...
one must be ready
to sink deep back
into chairs of warm

highlighting thoughts
as they creep through

one must read Martie
ready to accept

difference

and charm.

Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

2 posted 2003-07-11 10:18 PM

I'll agree with Sunshine...but I liked it nonetheless

Another dream that will never come true just to compliment your sorrow.....Disturbed

Logan
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since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

3 posted 2003-07-11 10:43 PM

But the image of the light always remains in mind, so there is no loss if you believe...very gentle smile to you Martie, very well done

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

4 posted 2003-07-11 11:21 PM

this is a great one,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

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since 2003-01-23

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Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2003-07-11 11:53 PM

It's in the poetry....it all comes through for those with eyes to see.....and I tell you this, that you can touch beyond, if anyone ever could, as you touch many things that others cannot. The difference for poets like us is that we feel beyond what we can see and know, and what is there gives no quarter, allows no false hope, no condescending smile, no false reverence. The trick, if there is one, is not to mind, and if we can't manage that, not to mind that we mind.

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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

6 posted 2003-07-12 12:27 PM

Martie - I sit back and read your thoughts...

BC

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Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-21

Posts 5767
Southern Abstentia

7 posted 2003-07-12 01:14 AM

poet
good she is
always

S Arthur Grey
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since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

8 posted 2003-07-12 02:21 AM

snuffed out
blue blinks to black
as whisp of smoke rises
his dim shadow remains at large
moonlit

s.a.g.

mirror man
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since 2001-01-08

Posts 814

9 posted 2003-07-12 03:12 AM

A lot of meaning in this short piece. Enjoyed very much.

Goodknight
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since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

10 posted 2003-07-18 08:40 PM

this is great Martie - loved it - Paul

x8x_bigmike
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since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

11 posted 2003-07-18 08:57 PM

your ending leaves me with so many questions...maybe that was its purpose.

Mike

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