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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Turned Down We disappoint each other left unsaid the spaces pass instead turn away turn away a whisper eases into the silence it stains the bed When is time more then before or after step on it faster the dance is fed circle circle come back to the shoulder turn it slower Even past the opening gown the folder remains open the page turned down |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
terrific write,,,, A voice of honesty |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
another chapter animated another revolution a paragraph escapes the pen again and trends in our direction in the bent of ample aptitude |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
Now you know how to make me sad. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh, the agony that can be expressed in sixty-four words....May the fullness of it never be fully true, and may it always be poetic license, extrapolating from a little pain into the greater unknown. If not, my heart goes out to you, and........to anyone. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This one tugs at the heart, Martie. Big hugs to you, friend,  "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 gosh |
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VOE Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 119From the land of Camelot |
'silence...it stains the bed' Martie, this is descriptive beyond words! Excellent, even though the truth of it is so very sad. I speak from the Voice Of Experience |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Martie~~~ As always when reading your poems I am amazed. The picture your words paint are so vivid. Thanks for sharing...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
If hurt can be described in letters and syllables, you just did. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
... turned around... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Well done my sweet. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Oh goodness, Martie...I felt that pain.  Heart hugs to you, my friend Ethel |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
... Oh my..this hurts. ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
We disappoint each other left unsaid the spaces pass instead turn away turn away a whisper eases into the silence it stains the bed ================================ read this the other night..and still I dont know what to say....  |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
despair, elegantly s.a.g. [This message has been edited by S Arthur Grey (07-15-2003 12:40 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
circle circle come back to the shoulder turn it slower You never, ever fail to touch me! Thank you for your unique and special gifts Martie~ |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
you say so much withthese words - a very touching write - lovely Martie - Paul |
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x8x_bigmike Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130California, USA |
Even past the opening gown the folder remains open the page turned down ____ your poetry never ceases to inspire and motivate me to become realized in terms of my voice... Mike |
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