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For John (Destroying One Weapon)
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For John (Destroying One Weapon) |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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Did you really think you could stand up wave the sword for a little while then back down? Well I won't let you this time. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Feel it its in the air whether they like it or not love grows in strangest places and my will for holding on is stronger. I can let this place go if I have to. Can you? Doing nothing but dreaming of you while enduring promises and the last straw is when you make a stand bare naked heart and then you are barely naked at all trying to cover supposed wrong doings. Well I think I can continue to love you and damn the eyes that don't want to accept what they lost long before I came along. You can't write words and take them back like that. It just doesn't happen that way not in this world where love goes beyond all the impossibilities and if I'm wrong you'd better tell me now.. and if you can't handle me then turn around rewind yourself back to pain and the doom of a cell where anger is the main course every night. Go ahead turn around if you can but I don't think you will. I could care less about the eyes that decide for us what is right and wrong about loving each other. I never asked for open announcements and detailed testimonies of the heart and soul of the passion we have but you promised them delivered in slight and erased them like the feelings are going to dissappear just because you can use a backspace bar. This time I won't let you.. so don't ask me to hide anymore. I love you too much to humor your fears any longer. Late at night you'll come crawling back |
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JaiOfHeaven Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 207California, Usa |
You suspended me in a place where I could feel who you were. *Shrugs*...maybe im just trippin. So much emotion...Awesome write. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Awesome write, indeed. You expressed your emotions so well here! I felt it. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Jenn...  ...well said.  "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ahhh darn it all anyway, can a person get into a group hug here with ya? You did a great write of emotions Jenn, only wish I it was on a happier note.  |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
That's telling him Jenn ... and keep on telling him ... he needs to hear you ... and the world needs to hear, too. Oh, and this is a powerful write here, too, very good indeed. Hugs to you girl friend. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
"I could care less about the eyes that decide for us what is right and wrong about loving each other." been thinking about that quite a bit lately -- and wondering -- they didn't seem to mind it so much with Kate and Spencer... what is the world afraid of? |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
I could care less about the eyes that decide for us what is right and wrong about loving each other the difference between real love and relationships |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Jenn, the same part grabbed me, too... I could care less about the eyes that decide for us what is right and wrong about loving each other. For over five years, now, a part of the world has looked down on the love that Gary and I have together....but, we are still together. Our love is proving them wrong when they say that it won't last. If both of you want it...it will last, Jenn.  Hugs to you Ethel |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
You wear your emotions boldly, Jenn, and in true poetic style. You're a brave lady. I hope he listens, but also hope he is equally brave and straight forward as you. |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Thanks for letting me write this here...and for the support..it just needed to be written, although I have yet to see the person it was intended for.  Dear John, |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
quote: and I love you too much to keep hiding from them. . . sorry I didn't get to this earlier. . .since it is for me and all. . . but, I've been finding my sword again, and this time, I'm throwing away the holder. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------- I am tired of pretending. . . |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Jenn, by taking a stand I hope you gain the love you deserve. Good writing! |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Words, words , words ... words. Pleaseeeeeee ... stop with all the words and now go for some REAL action. That is what will repair this for all of you. Many hugs to you both. Love, Janette always seeking joy, adventure and romance and wishing you find the same |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"I can continue to love" "love goes beyond all the impossibilities and if I'm wrong you'd better tell me now.." "what is right and wrong about loving each other" "I love you too much to humor your fears any longer" jenn...what an outpouring of emotions...this is such a touching piece about real love...i hear you...soothe my fears for love is all that matters in this world… fear is something that stops us from reaching levels of love for whatever reasons…there are no impossibilities in love for I would live under a bridge and eat mud to be with you…for all that matters is…being with you. "love grows in strangest places" of course this is my favorite part for how true this is for our hearts do not choose when and where, how and whom to love…it just loves I say it again…"love grows in strangest places" and thank God it does for at least it does…helen |
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