Your Kisses Contradict Themselves

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Open Poetry #27

Your Kisses Contradict Themselves

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

0 posted 2003-07-15 11:33 AM

I could never say aloud
How much your kisses burn
My throat
Like a cigerette,
Addicting poisons soothe me.

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

1 posted 2003-07-15 04:18 PM

Wow...!
Eric

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-07-15 04:26 PM

KoKo, this was very powerful for
such few words. I liked it.

Hugs

Ethel

KoKo
Senior Member

since 2003-02-15

Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow

3 posted 2003-07-15 05:40 PM

Thank you, guys

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

JaiOfHeaven
Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 207
California, Usa

4 posted 2003-07-16 02:16 AM

few words and straight to the point. Almost as I could feel the kiss. strongly stated.

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

5 posted 2003-07-16 02:46 AM

If cigarettes it be, then the kisses must taste as mine do!
Though I'd rather perch my lips on lips than on a butt, personally. I'm trying to quit, I promise.

Sorry, rambling on.. Great write and read!

[This message has been edited by Kaoru (07-16-2003 02:46 AM).]

Albert J. Allie
Senior Member

since 2003-02-13

Posts 512
Queens NY

6 posted 2003-07-16 06:43 PM

WOW I have had one like that once....ONCE.....Miss those days AND your poetry....

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