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Open Poetry #27

With Star Kissed Invitations

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2003-07-13 09:54 AM

With Star Kissed Invitations

Of emotional expressions
When sharing parts of me
Visualising through words
Which pieces do you see

Do I colour your thoughts
Is there mental stimulation
What pictures on my mind
Can hold such fascination

Did I become transparent
Can you see right through
Are my feelings conveyed
If when opened up to view

Heart dips in love and lust
Imagination led to believe
Was this mind over matter
Or my heart on my sleeve

With star kissed invitations
Hopefully to flow endlessly
My mind sketches dreams
Of heartstrings in harmony

Hope©2003

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-07-13 10:17 AM

With star kissed invitations
Hopefully to flow endlessly
My mind sketches dreams
Of heartstrings in harmony
Hope, this is so pretty. I love the way that you rhyme with such ease. Your poetry has such a beautiful flowing of words. I'm going to keep this one to study, if you don't mind.

Hugs

Ethel

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

2 posted 2003-07-13 12:42 PM

Ethel your very kind reply was much appreciated and yes keep anything of mine , that will be fine , in fact I feel honoured

Hope

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

3 posted 2003-07-13 02:18 PM

This is beautiful, thank you

Jennis#1
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 112
IL, Usa

4 posted 2003-07-13 02:40 PM

Super poem.

please visit my newetst posts in this forum.
They are called new poems and austism poems.
Thanks for writting this poem. It is wonderful.

-Jenn

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

5 posted 2003-07-14 08:11 PM

Heart dips in love and lust
Imagination led to believe
Was this mind over matter
Or my heart on my sleeve

Love that verse!

It's always nice to read your poetry Hope~

[This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (07-14-2003 08:12 PM).]

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

6 posted 2003-07-16 06:48 PM

Do I colour your thoughts
Is there mental stimulation
What pictures on my mind
Can hold such fascination

You colour mine Lady.

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