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Homeward Bound
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Homeward Bound |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
I can't compete with fantasy As I am reality My heart is full My soul is pure I won't rob you of your hopes As you bob and weave Against frustration, anger and dispair Over where you are forced to be You yearn for the bright lights that never dim in the desert While I bask in sunny skies And gulfstreams You want to gamble your soul for a chance at the Devil While safe havens beckon You teeter at the edge of sanity because of your talent, dream and aspirations Time is your friend One among many But let go of you anger Be played no more Come home sweet friend |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
This poem belongs in somebody's mailbox. Nicely composed. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
if she was complely sane, she wouldnt turn you on very creative and very good writing here, you are getting better each time |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
You want to gamble your soul for a chance at the Devil While safe havens beckon You teeter at the edge of sanity because of your talent, dream and aspirations Sounds like opposites attracting here to me. But, somne say that works. A very good poem, by the way. I enjoyed reading it.  hugs  Ethel |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Thank you all for your kind replies. I just love the encouragement. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
just write from the heart, thats all you can give |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
beautiful words! ARCTIC WIND |
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