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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-06-13 10:49 PM



Another sunset
breaks over
the Atlantic.

Colors pour down
like emotions
running off
this longing heart.

I sit on timeless rocks realizing
that the timezone between us
erases any romantic illusion
or bittersweet consolation
of even a syncronized view tonight.  


[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-15-2003 06:25 PM).]

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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-06-13 10:52 PM


I know how this is because me and Liam are in different timezones. Great write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Jason Lyle
Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
2 posted 2003-06-13 10:57 PM


My loves they span across the world
Some never met, with hearts of gold
I've never seen thier sunsets curled
Around A common seashore old



Jason

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
3 posted 2003-06-13 11:04 PM


Colors pour down
like emotions
running off
this longing heart

God thats just..poetry

HopeS
Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
4 posted 2003-06-13 11:25 PM


yes this one I can relate to , being in Australia I am a day ahead of most people in the states
Hope

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
5 posted 2003-06-14 05:07 AM


ouch!
BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
6 posted 2003-06-14 06:48 PM


Not even a bittersweet consolation?
That's tough isn't it?  Almost as bad
as an empty in box!  lol~  

Good write Michele~

QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
7 posted 2003-06-14 07:02 PM


as love grows the miles get shorter,,,

nice feelings in your write...

QjQ

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
8 posted 2003-06-14 08:51 PM


ahhh your skies are
much prettier Michele

thats your consolation . . .

but yes I do know this feeling

as always
teaching me
xxoo

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
9 posted 2003-06-15 06:26 PM


finally, i learned how to use that crying face. wow
Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
10 posted 2008-02-02 11:49 PM


Enjoyed!

ARCTIC WIND

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