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A Woman's Choice |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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They lay and wait for their fly by-night-mother to nurture them again in the womb they fill, step siblings to eachother, created of light and dark different moods different days, wednesday child caressed by sky, sunday songs of wristcutting angst, scattered poems, half truths sighs and whispers shouts and rants that come on whims, coming attractions preempted by paralysis or change of mood, they seek delivery, but have become mostly foreign to their mother now, wincing as she cannot meet their young eyes, haunted by them as days go by, knowing she must soon choose between life and death [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-11-2003 07:13 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
inkedgoddess So sad, good write, better thoughts to you,  |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
how is someone supposed to reply to this? i think you're being unfair michelle!   no, wait...you have me speechless and amazed at your stunning words and images. where does it all come from?? so, so glad to have u back. keeping this. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wow !! hugs, Chris |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Michelle, I stand in awe and amazement at the wonderful way you can write the feelings of your heart. You are a very talented writer, Michelle.  Hugs to you this morning  Ethel |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This choked me up! You have a way of doing that to me, ya know!  Luvin' hugs, EA |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
well done! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
scattered poems, half truths sighs and whispers shouts and rants that come on whims, I guess that is why we are here... releasing some of that angst. hugss M |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
So much to chose, so much to lose .... Is not the night but a womb of chance, the dawn deliverance, and daylight life? Amazing the things you see in the light! |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
very good,very sad. but i enjoyed reaing it. thanks for sharing with us. |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Very deep.....very deep. Well done |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks for stopping by  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
wow |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
tragic story |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
truthfully its a bout all these poems i was writing while i was away from here,and then pondering on some other subject....... and some of them arent appropro for posting and some of them are strange to me now......and i dont know whether to give them voice or rip them to shreds...............its this womans choice........ |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome! but so sad Michele, geez  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
. . . and what a brilliant choice it is Hey Michele - you see that star by my name . . . Ill let you know when your being bad . . . *wink* This is bittersweet - keep posting please or else you will be in trouble xxoo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
thanks dixiecup, and sue, yes, youll be watching me i know,,,,,,im trying real real hard.... |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
hahaha - you are a beautiful person, Michele truly xxoo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sue, ill take that , i could use it right about now.......but hon, it takes one to know one..... |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Wow....lots of replies to this interesting write. The more I read it the better I like. Still sad however. Cheer up, better days are coming! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
VERY DEEP ARCTIC WIND |
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