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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-06-14 09:31 AM


Liquid Solutions

For spilled milk...
    get
       a
          cat.

For spilled tears...
    make
       wiser
          choices.

Said someone...
    easier
        said
           than
              done.


JamesLee
June14
2003

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RedStoneEB
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1 posted 2003-06-14 09:33 AM


um interesting thing to read enjoyed

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

LngJhnAg
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Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion
2 posted 2003-06-14 10:17 AM


James - I like that part about using milk to lure a cat.  I always suspected you were a kitty kicker, too!  I like the metaphors that tie the thoughts together.
passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-06-14 02:29 PM


cool write James...

Mike, lay off the kitty-kickin!

gyiel marlok
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4 posted 2003-06-14 02:58 PM


COOL
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2003-06-14 04:24 PM


Thank you Red Stone, Lng Jhn, passing shadows and gyiel for the nice responses...
No John I don't kick the kitty...and you better not or someday you'll find yourself on a safari in Africa and a lion or a tiger will pay you a visit...James

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
6 posted 2008-02-02 12:00 PM


And that is true!

ARCTIC WIND

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