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New Beginnings |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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just a short mess around with words that i was working with seeing what i could create in this mind of mine its not really that good but its ok everything needs work could call this the beginning of what would be a great poem if i reached the end ________________________________________ This is the new beginning of life As I enter the world I long to hide Facing fears I hold deep down inside Once my fears are banished from the world May I walk in peace along the roads And Into that light I wish I could hold At last my dreams mix with my reality Merging my worlds forming the one And the fears I hold turn into dust Now I can walk into the light of love |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
At last my dreams mix with my reality Merging my worlds forming the one And the fears I hold turn into dust Now I can walk into the light of love Well, all right. Your fooling around with words produced a very nice verse. What is even better? It speaks to me this morning. I really like this...the dreams of love (which I oft write) and the reality of love (which I don't oft write) because the dreams (or musings) are so much better!!! Perhaps a merge of the two, as you say, will result in a stroll in the love's light. I shall give it a try! Much enjoyed. Patricia |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Patricia Glad you liked my little mess around and im sure if you mix dreams with the real world the light of love will shine on you check out my other poems i took more care in them lol my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good good good! keep messin' around |
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gyiel marlok Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 145OHIO |
PRETTY COOL |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
lol are you the CAPS LOCK GIRL my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
nice little mess of words you have here Red lol you will find that light . . . keep walking the path xxoo |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
very nice Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Nice indeed ARCTIC WIND |
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