Open Poetry #27 |
Naive Admiration |
KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
You are an angelically white crow Swimming through the deepest blue And I, a lonely ladybug, Await your pecking beak To pick me up, take me away, So I may see the world you do. I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. --Chang Tzu [This message has been edited by KoKo (07-14-2003 10:27 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Ooh! This is good! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Thanks muchly! I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Up, up and a-w-a-y! Fly free and fly high into the cerulean blue sky! "...a lonely ladybug"--I'll keep you company, Dear Lauren! I love ladybugs! Loves 'n hugs, EA |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
AAAAaaw, thanks EA!!!!! You're a darling I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Koko, I really like this. It has a desire to fly free in it. Maybe like a butterfly?? Hugs Ethel |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
i see you're in top form again...well done lauren! |
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VOE Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 119From the land of Camelot |
I love the analogy of this one! A ladybug wishing to be consumed by the object of her affections, so she will become part of the grand scheme....just fantastic in theme and form!!! Bravo!! I speak from the Voice Of Experience |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Thanks Eddles VOE: You're absolutely right! Thanks I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
G'mornin lauren! |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Hey you!!! Mornin' to you tooooo!!! ^-^ I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man. |
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Albert J. Allie Senior Member
since 2003-02-13
Posts 512Queens NY |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Loved this! i'm keeping it! |
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