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Open Poetry #27

Claret Savor

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-07-13 03:31 AM

Claret Savor

sleeplessness clung
to the night glaze
till the vintage
of sky broke
splashing the flow
in full supply
of claret and blue
through morning glass
droplets filling
crystal dawn
a season’s yield
of summer
understood appreciation
bubbling waiting
for a taste

"if you keep looking back, you are going to miss your whole life" Unknown

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-07-13 03:35 AM

awesome

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

2 posted 2003-07-13 12:36 PM

Dixie stole my word..and it is truly..beautiful writing h

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-07-13 01:23 PM

Beautiful.
Eric

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

4 posted 2003-07-13 01:31 PM

That tasted as good as it read :-)

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

5 posted 2003-07-13 01:53 PM

Lovely..

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-07-13 04:12 PM

Beautiful indeed Helen . . .

I just noticed your sig:

"if you keep looking back, you are going to miss your whole life"

xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (07-13-2003 07:10 PM).]

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