Open Poetry #27 |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
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down I hold the finger taut against the strings of my distraught cymbals in a distant light zing toward my eye--too bright awkward elbows edging us holding strings across the bar this is just a small litmus testing of the we in US... absolution of the sum see the sun of me in you I see I speak divinity and find we US in silences saying all the things of must as we buy defiances... Rock with me? as I move toward oasis in monsoon of a desert in a storm blowing wind in day of borne as I am I am as hatch-- revealing feathers in the thatch crosshair grasses braided thrice... tell me I just might believe whisper and I'll hold you tight tell me hold me through the grieve and everything won't be alright and nothing is the same again in this honesty. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
as I am I am as hatch-- revealing feathers in the thatch ~*~ revealing more... revealing life |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, gentle one. Your words flow like the finest of wine, and as such, leave a pleasing taste to the palate...very gentle smile |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A sparkling champagne of finely aged lament. TD |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity blaze - stunning write from you pen... BC |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity "hold me through the grieve and everything won't be alright and nothing is the same again in this honesty." ![]() |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I wanted to say thanks to you all for reading. This was one that ached just writing it, so know that you have my heartfelt gratitude. ![]() Thank you for reading and for letting me KNOW that you did. It's very much appreciated. Love and hugs. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
four bar blues on blue blaze.... resonance reverb mixolidian riff |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good God - the last lines K humbled truly . . . xxoo |
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