Open Poetry #27 |
LittleWing (poem for her) |
RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
i wrote this for littlewing because shes helped me understand my poetry more and shes been nice to me so she said she likes angels and i thought shed like me to write her an angel poem well hope she likes it. _________________________________________________ Walking along the cold night air An angel sings her sweet lullaby Sending me to a place deep inside Opening the world that I long to stay As I float through the forest within An angel followed by me along Protecting me from my nightmares I watched the angel spread his wings Wishing and longing to be like him Suddenly out from my back came my wish Spreading my wings smiling deeply within Floating to the heavens above Touching clouds that angels could There in the distance I saw her shine bright Littlewing the cutest angel tonight She moved her eyes towards mine As she smiled and flew to my side Filling me with happiness I longed I could find inside She whispered so gently into my mind “Sweetest lee write this dream tonight” Slowly she faded into the light As morning awoke me from my dream |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
She whispered so gently into my mind “Sweetest lee write this dream tonight” Slowly she faded into the light As morning awoke me from my dream This is so sweet, Lee. I know that our Sue will love it. Hugs Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Lee: you have no idea how much I really needed this right now and how sweet of you to post it for me here . . . It means so much to me - and the part about your wings . . . Smiling HUGE that you see me in this light and am grateful that you are here . . . All I did was help to bring out something beautiful that resides in you to begin with . . . you Lee - are an angel for writing this truly and I thank you, my friend Keep writing (this is beautiful . . .) God - I am so surprised . . . you made me smile xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-14-2003 02:14 AM).] |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
Red: is nice to see fresh talent what a beautiful write from one angel to another Welcome to PIP I look forward to more from you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just a beautiful write, wonderful tribute to our angel Sue |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
Glad you all liked the poem i wrote for sue maybe if we become freinds ill write you one too lol my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautiful post! ARCTIC WIND |
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